11.Pulsations

11.Pulsations

A Poem by pal
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Poem N Video by Pal. The sound of heart beat Thud..thud.. thud.. Vibrating pulse on the wrist; visible living signs. Eat, drink, sleep, procreate; signs of active life. True life is beyond.

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Pulsations

 

The sound of heart beat

Thud..thud.. thud..

Vibrating pulse on the wrist

All visible living signs

 

Eat, drink, sleep, procreate

Working, making love

Communicating with others

 Clear signs of active life

 

Every thing happen routine like

Structured life experience platform

Creation-existence-destruction

Never end soul journey

 

We are not alone

Many like us move on

Live in harmony at times

Most times live in distress

 

Keep on searching peace

Some sort of balance

For the soul to rest

A deep breath of satisfaction

 

Life is too complex

Many lives we come

Each time still ignorant

As if the journey never ends

 

I don’t dispute Darwin

Human Souls in this body

Understanding oneself in totality

Evolve like anything else in nature

 

Introspection in to myself

Make me perceive

Life is only a matter of pulsations

Positive, negative, neutral

 

Electro-Magnetic excitations

Nerve nodes sensing them up

Complex central nervous station

Processing them pretty fast

 

In fraction of moment

Send back flash signals

Green for positive (+ve)

Red negative (-ve) pulsation

 

Many feel good +ve pulsations

Frown upon unpleasant -ve

Isn’t it funny some time

Reverse become true!

 

Life become complicated

When we start judge

Brand these pulsations

Good or bad  

 

Worse is when 

Some docs like prescriptions

Must do’s and don’ts

Indicating a path to heaven

 

Judgments often stop movement

Clear mark of mental blocks

With guilt, confusion and frustration

A true path towards ignorance

 

Pal


Poem n video by Pal

17.Pulsations

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oUC0SnUxMYk

 

 

Poem by Pal. Translation n video by Marina, Russia

29.Pulsations (КОЛЕБАНИЯ) - in Ruski

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4cuDoC8fcO8

 

Poem by pal. Translation by Plamena n video by Kamelia, Bulgaria

37.Pulsations (Пулсации) - in Bulgarski

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oc07PbllTDA

 

© 2008 pal


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To be honest with you, I was, at first, not enthused about reading a "long" poem (been a long day and I can't focus very well). But I decided to give your poem a try, and I am GLAD I decided to do so! What an excellent piece! Very thought-provoking. It was beautifully written. It managed to capture my interest and hold it. At various points throughout the poem, I found myself thinking about what you were actually saying. You have many philosophical beliefs packed into the poem. Excellent writing!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Very nice write! I liked the feel of the thought processes here. It was a fast paced read and flowed through to the end. Liked it!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

an interesting philosophy. nicely done. thanks for sharing. life is what we make of it, always we try. Merry Christmas!

Posted 17 Years Ago


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You don't dispute Darwin? Even Darwin disputed Darwin! He had no faith in his own theory of evolution...and neither do I. Nor do I believe that reincarnation is possible, but these are my opinions only.
It is not a good idea to stand in judgement of others...lest you be judged. We need to remember that no matter how tough we look and act, no matter how many tattoos we have, we are fragile beings who need to move away from hate and towards love...if we don't do this we are only existing under false pretences.
You made me think with your words Pal and that is a good thing! As far as God being self, well I'm not touching that one or I'll be here all day...
Helen :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write. This an excellent piece I I thank you for sharing.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We are not alone
Many like us move on
Live in harmony at times
Most times live in distress

Keep on searching peace
Some sort of balance
For the soul to rest
A deep breath of satisfaction

Life is too complex
Many lives we come
Each time still ignorant
As if the journey never ends

Very powerful lines there ... This made me think a lot about life and the decisions we make ... wonderful though provoking poem!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Eat, drink, sleep, procreate
Working, making love
Communicating with others
Clear signs of active life

Every thing happen routine like
Structured life experience platform
Creation-existence-destruction
Never end soul journey

We are not alone
Many like us move on
Live in harmony at times
Most times live in distress

Keep on searching peace
Some sort of balance
For the soul to rest
A deep breath of satisfaction

Life is too complex
Many lives we come
Each time still ignorant
As if the journey never ends

I think you should italizice this part, it sounds like you screaming, like spoken words...
Overall it was a good read and very interestin indeed...
Thanks for the request and keep them coming...
One!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pal, you have much wisdom my friend, I like all the lessons you portray in your poetry, they are all so positive, you are a true spirit of our creator.
Tony

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

another wonderful video to go with the beautiful words -- i am truly enjoying these video that accompany the fantastic poems...

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well written and thought out. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

to be neither compelled by the past nor future beckoned, not ready to tell it is this or that, to be free from all that blinds, to use the Heart as the seer the chooser and the Lover, ahh it is all that it is ...

a delightful scientific rhapsody, Pal!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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