11.Pulsations

Poem N Video by Pal. The sound of heart beat Thud..thud.. thud.. Vibrating pulse on the wrist; visible living signs. Eat, drink, sleep, procreate; signs of active life. True life is beyond.

 

Pulsations

 

The sound of heart beat

Thud..thud.. thud..

Vibrating pulse on the wrist

All visible living signs

 

Eat, drink, sleep, procreate

Working, making love

Communicating with others

 Clear signs of active life

 

Every thing happen routine like

Structured life experience platform

Creation-existence-destruction

Never end soul journey

 

We are not alone

Many like us move on

Live in harmony at times

Most times live in distress

 

Keep on searching peace

Some sort of balance

For the soul to rest

A deep breath of satisfaction

 

Life is too complex

Many lives we come

Each time still ignorant

As if the journey never ends

 

I don’t dispute Darwin

Human Souls in this body

Understanding oneself in totality

Evolve like anything else in nature

 

Introspection in to myself

Make me perceive

Life is only a matter of pulsations

Positive, negative, neutral

 

Electro-Magnetic excitations

Nerve nodes sensing them up

Complex central nervous station

Processing them pretty fast

 

In fraction of moment

Send back flash signals

Green for positive (+ve)

Red negative (-ve) pulsation

 

Many feel good +ve pulsations

Frown upon unpleasant -ve

Isn’t it funny some time

Reverse become true!

 

Life become complicated

When we start judge

Brand these pulsations

Good or bad  

 

Worse is when 

Some docs like prescriptions

Must do’s and don’ts

Indicating a path to heaven

 

Judgments often stop movement

Clear mark of mental blocks

With guilt, confusion and frustration

A true path towards ignorance

 

Pal

Poem n video by Pal

17.Pulsations

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oUC0SnUxMYk

 

 

Poem by Pal. Translation n video by Marina, Russia

29.Pulsations (КОЛЕБАНИЯ) - in Ruski

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4cuDoC8fcO8

 

Poem by pal. Translation by Plamena n video by Kamelia, Bulgaria

37.Pulsations (Пулсации) - in Bulgarski

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oc07PbllTDA

 

Reviews

[DrumMajorPod]

To be honest with you, I was, at first, not enthused about reading a "long" poem (been a long day and I can't focus very well). But I decided to give your poem a try, and I am GLAD I decided to do so! What an excellent piece! Very thought-provoking. It was beautifully written. It managed to capture my interest and hold it. At various points throughout the poem, I found myself thinking about what you were actually saying. You have many philosophical beliefs packed into the poem. Excellent writing!

[Touché Armada]

Nice flow of ideas on day by day thoughts from most people.
the furture was never set in stone, but rather far less permanent substance,
so its quite bendable made to shape ourselves really. What we shape is sooooo
different from person to person.

[Jason]

cyclical in nature, poetically put my friend.
however, the future is never written.
Great job.
j

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Everything is relative and up for grabs floating in the abstract air until it meets the atmosphere of truth then the law of gravity takes over and it all hits the ground and we see it could never really fly by itself after all. Very cleaver write it is nice to see your skill of word smithing.

[Legion]

The questions abound. Life perpetuates itself and the cycle continues. An interesting poem with many angles to contemplate. Kudos. Reminds me of mine called "The Primal Instinct" somewhat. Kudos.

[jakelsen]

You are an old soul, my friend. This is the age-old question, are we more than just hunks of flesh? You say,

"Life is too complex

Many lives we come

Each time still ignorant

As if the journey never ends"

I personally think we have too much to learn to get it in one lifetime.

Interesting and thought provoking.

[R J Askew]

I enjoyed the read. There are lines in the peom to spark endless hours of debate. My reason tells me, 'yes, it is all electrical impulses, everything IS explicable' and then imagination presses a dagger of doubt to reason's throat and says 'Are you sure?'

[Jester]

Yet another beautiful poem my friend.

[rose]

Our vibrations are dynamic. We are different and same. Understanding our nature can make life easer and give us wisdom not to judge anyone. We have to keep this message in us always. Very clear and deep poem.

Thank you
Rose

[Kuntry]

This one left my head spinning. Had my mind going all over the place. your message comes across very clear... I really like this one. Well written....

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Great message with much to ponder - thanks for sharing, a very thoughtful, philisophical work.
Light,
Siddartha