08.Universal love

Poem n video by pal. In human soul; God softly whispered "LOVE ALL"; ALL are part of this creation; Vibrating-a sign of life; Oh! What a disappointment; The lord puts his head down; Acknowledging his own guilt; For placing trust in human.

 

Universal love

 

God created “ALL” with great care

And lot of love in their hearts

He created all, plants, trees,

Creatures, birds, animals, humans

 

He made no difference

Low-high, big-small, long-short,

Fat-thin, black-white, Old-young

Child-adult and Male-female

 

He made all interdependent

Plants-trees-creatures-humans

Supporting each others to live

In a harmonious way

 

However, he made one difference

Certainly it was a big one

Gave advantage to humans

As against all other creation

 

In human he put in brain/mind

With greater capacity

To think, understand, interpret

And skillfully manipulate and move

 

Human, highest form of creation

Certainly, God wanted this creation

To take lead, support and to think

For all other parts of creation

 

To make human task easy

He gave human a heart

And a great range of emotions

To feel/share pains and pleasures

 

In human soul

God softly whispered “LOVE ALL”

ALL are part of this creation

Vibrating-a sign of life

 

Oh! What a disappointment

The lord puts his head down

Acknowledging his own guilt

For placing trust in human

 

The human thought only “LOVE”

Forgot the UNIVERSE

And the Creator of ALL

What a shame on humanity

 

LOVE of all the pleasures of life

The materials-home

Vehicles, clothes, all comforts

And of his own kith and kinds

 

So selfish at times

In eagerness get to “LOVE”

Hurt all other form creation

Bringing pain and destruction

 

Pal

 

 Poem n video by pal

48.Universal love

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K-R0ufgzWSI

 

 

Reviews

[Helen Woodward]

Shameful indeed! We are a selfish, uncaring race of beings and I'm sure you're right about God hanging his head in deep dissapointment about us and this makes me sad, but we also have to take free choice into consideration and people have the choice. Its like smokers, they don't stop until it's too late and it's almost too late to rectify the damage done to our civilization...
A very thoughtful piece of work with all valid points that should be written across the sky in big letters...
Helen...

[Iola]

Would it then be true to say that emotion doesn't make "the human task that easy"?
Just a thought?

[Yaooooooo]

I dont fully agree with you, i cant picture God putting his head down in shame. God loves all his children and thats what we are. Many might if theirs really a God why does he let all the bad happen, first we shouldnt question God but is a real simple asnwer to that question. Is like a child whos learning how to ride a bike, you going to hold them the first time, and maybe the second time but you cant run after them the hole time. Eventually they will fall, and when they do you cant always be there for them, all you hope is for them to get back and continue on from there, and maybe learn from their mistakes. God did say, "I may not come when you call but I'm always in time" Never question the all mighty one!!!
One!

[Nick Erickson]

Ironic... funny in a way... how we always hurt those we love the most. Well written.

[Greg the Bard]

Sad repore with God unto one-self. The prose is writen very well but I feel it lacks rhyme. That makes the read a little rough. I however doesn't take away for the centreal theme. Good work

[Tania Leigh]

This is an excellent poem for everyone to read.....well done!

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Your last three stanzas say it all. Heartfelt and well approached. The eighth section could stand alone as a beautiful piece of prose with a clear message. Best wishes, Bethlynne.

[Pema Dorje]

Love does not differentiate and the Heart is an organ of Love ...

[Fran Marie]

A wonderful write and oh so true to be sure~well done!~Fran Marie

[Pendelum Poet]

This is so very true. It was strong and deep, and again, a very true statement you are putting out there!

[SM Davis]

OOOhhhh so true. this is a delicate and poigniant write! I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Your form is perfect. Keep writing!!