pictures of eight am.

pictures of eight am.

A Poem by gonzologic

another all night morning
one more sunset eight am
grinning into sleepless crazy eyes
they can read the time
and buzzed, bewildered, dazed and hazy
but they don't ask
they don't know why,
one more nothing they won't try

the gray light of one more
tomorrow morning
another almost-not-quite
born in one more
yesterday night
almost barely touching alright
that just can't seem to
get it right

close enough to touch
and light enough to see
disappearing from your fingertips
like last night's shadows
vanishing
see it fading from the walls
in one more early morning sunset
one more brushstroke paints a picture
and it seems like it won't ever finish

but who can say what makes it done,
maybe we'll know by one more sun
maybe we just need another one

© 2008 gonzologic


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Gonzo buddy, you've done it again. You've amazed me yet again. It's something how you continuously pump out fresh and perspective writing that never ceases to leave me slightly dazed, then amazed all at once. Your poetry continues to be full of insight and witty wisdom. Keep it up man.

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gonzologic
gonzologic

Merrill/Wausau, WI



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I'm a real piece of work. A code to be deciphered as you see fit. I can't really say much about myself other than I am Myself and nothing more. I'll let you decide the rest. That's up to you. more..

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