The deal

The deal

A Poem by gomjordan23

What is the deal?
Nothing can just go smoothly
I don't ask for much
What is the deal?


I just want to be happy
And not be bothered.
That can't be too much to ask for,
What is the deal?


I wish to avoid stress
But it seems thats impossible.
Is that greedy of me?
What is the deal?


Try to be supportive of others
But lack support in return.
How silly of me to want that too?
What is the deal?


Respect and compassion,
Two simple wants
But too complex to receive
What is the deal?


Perhaps isolation is the key,
Solidarity seems a dream.
Am i too old to dream?
What is the deal?


Everyone else has these issues
But they don't seem to complain about it.
Life is simple, why does it feel so complicated?
What is my deal?

© 2009 gomjordan23


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Added on February 7, 2009
Last Updated on February 8, 2009

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gomjordan23
gomjordan23

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