Intensely Herself

When you have found your soul

The complicated was now simple

A turn on

In the darkness her spirit was glowing

Lighting the path ahead

She could finally see

Confetti of life was flowing

 

Chimes from her sanctuary were ringing

Her soul dancing and singing

In control of her own weather

Her chaos tightly coiled together

 

Her wings were the fabric of the sky

The wind her fuel

Free she was to fly

 

She didn’t have all the answers

But she had truth on her side

No longer had to hide

The obstacle was now the path

No room for wrath

 

Ready to create

Challenge her fate

Crown her most beautiful mistake

Spiritually redecorate

 

Pretenses placed on the shelf

She was just…

 

Intensely herself

 

Reviews

[Autumn Lyric]

"Intensely Herself"...beautifully creative and original imagery here. I was swept away by its simplicity and the joy of her embracing just being all that she is...

[goldie uttamchandani]

thank you so very much!!

[Nyu]

A beautiful poem, I really liked it. So many great lines such as "Her wings were the fabric of the sky." A very original flow of ideas.

[goldie uttamchandani]

Thanks so much for the appreciation!

[nazia]

Individuality is just so important.. especially liked the closing line.. good job

[goldie uttamchandani]

Thank you so much Nazia!!

[Yellowpinch]

Great title and a great finsh to the poem.
I like 'she didn't have all the answers, but she had truth on her side.'
A good relating of self-discovery.

[goldie uttamchandani]

Many thanks for the lovely feedback!