A poem

Heavy heart
I'm carrying
walking this earth
of no ground


Blurry vision
faceless figures
not to shiver
me I try

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

This little piece of brevity feels so lonely to me. Like a ghost trapped who can't move on. All good wishes Lake.

Chris

[Lale]

Thank you dear

[wordman]

life with no purpose,no sunshine

[Lale]

it feels that way sometimes...

[Betty Hermelee]

It seems you are floating in a state of darkness, with a heavy heart; no clarity, only as blurry vision; figures are obscured.. you only see them as a blur, one into the other; short and very meaningful.
I love it!
Yours, Betty

[Lale]

What a beautiful interpretation! Thank you..

[Just Kim]

I enjoyed this write, i can feel this write

[Lale]

Thank you for reading.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I shiver from loneliness sometimes...the ghosts of relationships past...the ground seems awfully desolate, the heart even more so...
j.

[Lale]

I dislike loneliness...

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Only my response can be. You are flying on sublime sea. Divine flattering with cosmos and infinity. It's poetry of beyond of beyond .

[Lale]

Thank you...

[Relic]

Seems like a ghost walking the earth, confused, sad, and lonely.

Nice one.

[Lale]

Thank you so much...