July eve

mood

Salty breeze
Bach on

July eve

Author's Note

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B3JcHWCA-VA

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I'm not super crazy about super short poems becuz I usually want MORE! But in this case, you've done what super-short poems should do . . . giving us food for thought, for a much longer mental experience after reading these words. What I most love is that every line is super fresh & original, especially first two lines with things people don't usually mention when writing about the beach (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Lale]

I was listening to tha french song when I felt that mood. It took me a while to select the items needed to create that mood. I love the beach and I'm missing it so much. Thank you dear.

[barleygirl]

I love this: "It took me a while to select the items needed to create that mood" -- I tend to be a jackrabbit writer, so I'm intrigued with those of you who take your time to savor out a few morsels. I could never be so judicious as I chose words! *smile*

[Lale]

Spontanity is amazing, too!
Btw, I really like the facial expressions that you use haha.

[wordman]

looking out at the ocean,a soft breeze blowing,feel the mist of the waves,smell the orange blossoms

[Lale]

the orange flower scent is coming out of the ice cream
thank you for reviewing

[wordman]

i like lemon custard and each

[wordman]

peach lol ,,,,,,,,,,

[Lale]

I like lemon flavour too

[wordman]

i probably like them all

[Lale]

nobody hates ice cream

[wordman]

you`re right,,the international food we all love

[Jimmy Yetts]

Instantly creates a lovely scene and a warm mood.
Most effective minimalism!

[Lale]

Thank you @Jimmy for reading.

[Chris Shaw]

You certainly created the mood with this wonderful piece of brevity. Thank you also for the link. I enjoyed your choice.

Chris

[Lale]

Thank you Chris. You're always so kind.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the video. The month of July, the sea near and the smell of the salt. It is paradise. Very nice use of words dear Poet.
Coyote

[Lale]

Hello
I've been thinking about that mood for sometime.. it is indeed a paradise . Thank you for reading.

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the sea and now I live in Michigan. I have my great lakes near. The bodies of waters teaches us peace and calm. You are welcome Lale.

[Lale]

have fun and enjoy :)