July eve

July eve

A Poem by Lale
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mood

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Salty breeze
Bach on
July eve


© 2020 Lale


Author's Note

Lale
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B3JcHWCA-VA

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love your brevity...I can picture myself sitting on the beach with some swig (prefer wine) in my hand with a cool breeze and nothing better than Bach....a serenity and peace. Lovely
Fondly, Betty

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lale

4 Years Ago

it feels like home.. thank you so much for your kind review.
Like these kinds of lines, you can play about with them.
July eve.
Salty breeze.
Bach on.



Posted 4 Years Ago


Lale

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the visit..
yes, I can see you on the beach, having spent the whole day now feeling guilty about leaving the cat all alone
But it is lovely there

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lale

4 Years Ago

So lovely that I lost track of the time..
A perfect definition of enjoyment...

Music and nature make very good company

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lale

4 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Makes me think of a sultry beach on a July evening. My mind awash with the possibilities therein. Love it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lale

4 Years Ago

what a nice mood! Thank you for reading, Pestonjee.
AJNJ

4 Years Ago

It was a pleasure all mine 🤗

.... I just thought you should know, I enjoyed these words much more and far longer than it took me to read them..

Neville

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lale

4 Years Ago

I'm glad you did. Thank you for reading. :)
Neville

4 Years Ago


you are welcome..
A perfect six word idyll.

Interesting video, tune rhythmic . Understood some of the French, but grateful for the translation. Thought the music was going to be by Bach... surprised.. but..

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lale

4 Years Ago

I love the theme of the video.. sunset, youth & beach.. found it interesting to share. Thank you for.. read more
emmajoy

4 Years Ago

And I really enjoyed sharing it, thank you! :)
Lale

4 Years Ago

you're welcome :)
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A impression of nature at moment of stillness when all things are moving. But just our mind is silent and free.

This is my own intepretation of your short writing.

I like it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lale

4 Years Ago

That's a beautiful way to look at it.. thank you for sharing your intepretation..
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4 Years Ago

Sometimes i have hard time to give review. Even i like some particular writing enormously. I try to .. read more
Lale

4 Years Ago

I see. It happens sometimes. Thank you.
Listening to Bach near the beach....the waves are the background for Bach. ahhhh, the perfect scene. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lale

4 Years Ago

I totally agree. Thank you for reading.
yes, he goes well with a July breeze, i think...
and those listening, heat up even more ...
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lale

4 Years Ago

I always pretend to hear ocean waves in Bach music; it calms me.

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Added on June 12, 2020
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