Skeptical

Too drowned to flow

this sick, twisted doubt

of not having

a home

to belong

Reviews

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From my personal experience place like a home can exist. But it takes so many years of lonely wondering through landscape of own illusions . To find people who have simulate nature like you. It's never easy to come by but there is always one at large mount of humans. Skepticism is good tool to regornized when we are standing but optimism is light to find out right place at this world made by miracle .

I like your poem like self reflective observation from own perspective. There is honesty and truthful impression .

[Lale]

"so many years of lonely wondering through landscape of own illusions." well said
I totally agree, It takes years to build a home. Nobody wants to remain a voyager.
Thank you for always sharing your fruitful insights.

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You welcome . What i wanted to try said it was we cannot be whole our life just outsiders there is always some place or person waiting for you. Even it take sometimes lot of to time to get there. At my personal experience this toke me over 20 years.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when everywhere feels like we are a visitor, we feel excommunicated from life.

so much expressed in this. And I am a big proponent of "less is more."

[Lale]

"when everywhere feels like we are a visitor, we feel excommunicated from life." THAT IS IT.
Sometimes you feel like you're running out of words, but there is simply nothing more to say. I like short poems too. Thank you for your review.

[wordman]

a hard place to be at in your life

[Lale]

It is indeed..

[Esteban Morfín]

short and heavy. nicely done!

[Lale]

Thank you for your kind review. Looking forward to reading your work.

[Unspoken poet]

I like this, found it emotional. nice writing

[Lale]

Thank you @Kay-T.

[Chris Shaw]

A piece of brevity which has a strong impact. Not having a home where you feel you belong is likely to cause great upset. Everyone deserves a roof over their head which offers refuge and safety. My thoughts turn here to the homeless and their plight. I have strong feelings about that. No one should be living on the streets.

Chris

[Lale]

You're absolutely right. I pray for the homeless people. Everyone deserves to be sheltered.