Fallen stars

The start of a broken poem

 

Dear my love,

One day you’ll get sick of shooting stars

And by then its dust will be a reminisce in your heart

Author's Note

Won "First runner up" in the 'I love you, I hate you' contest :)
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/I-Love-You%2C-I-Hate-You/45127/

Won "4th" in "the One line wonder, again" contest :)
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/One-Line-Wonder%2C-again%21/45088/

Won "6th" in the "Aye" contest :)
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Aye%3F/45089/

Reviews

[Angelic Surrender]

Short, to the point, sweet. A very nice poem indeed

[xSamilynnx]

very good!!!

[Asb]

amazing ..... sweet and nice :)

[Tamia123]

Short, Sweet, and very powerful!

[Archia]

Oh that's really beautiful, short and sweet truly.

[McKenna B.]

very simple but intruiging. It leaves me wanting to read more. well done.