Mocking Love

I guess it wasn't meant to be...but u dragged me along, now all i have to show for it is carpet burns.

You took pleasure in my

sweat and tears,

you used me as a

bridge to cross

stormy seas, 

but when it became 

sunny

you left me. 

G.E 2010

Reviews

[Raya Avans]

I like how you can put so much emotion that most everyone can relate to in so little. Very well done :)

[Dove]

This is sad but well done.

[*Evelen*]

Sad but great write. Well done.

[Tori]

Very intense. What it lacks in length, it makes up for in appeal. I love it :) Awesome!