I can't.

I can't.

A Poem by godmandistfu

Hurting. I’m hurting.

I want to scream so bad.

Please, help me.


I can't stop.

© 2010 godmandistfu


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"Hurting, I'm hurting" You're hurting from something - physical pain? Emotional pain? Spiritual pain? Mental pain?
"I want to scream so bad" The pain is so intense you want to cry out for help, just so someone will hear you, though you're not sure if you want to for sure.
"Please, help me" You're asking for help, pleading for someone to find your broken form and save you from your misery.
"I can't stop" Makes me think you're the one causing your own pain.

This is excellent. If you ever need someone to talk to, I will always lend an ear and a kind heart to help you, my friend.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"Hurting, I'm hurting" You're hurting from something - physical pain? Emotional pain? Spiritual pain? Mental pain?
"I want to scream so bad" The pain is so intense you want to cry out for help, just so someone will hear you, though you're not sure if you want to for sure.
"Please, help me" You're asking for help, pleading for someone to find your broken form and save you from your misery.
"I can't stop" Makes me think you're the one causing your own pain.

This is excellent. If you ever need someone to talk to, I will always lend an ear and a kind heart to help you, my friend.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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godmandistfu
godmandistfu

Plymouth, MI



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My name is Mandi Lea. I am fifteen years old. I think i'm a little messed up. I don't see things the way I should. I rebel against my own morals. It's almost like I have two people in my head tel.. more..

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