Dear Charlie, letter number one.

6-25-10. <3?

I saw you in his eyes last night,

and I couldn't speak.

You have this hold on my emotions.

I don't even know why.

What is it about you that makes me want to hold on?

There's no promise I will have you,

In the end you won't be mine.

It's just the way you capture me,

that makes me so curious.

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

Good job. You always make me want to read more of what you have written!
I've felt this way before for another person.. So I can relate easily to this piece.
Excellent