Charlie's different.

Charlie's different.

A Poem by godmandistfu
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Because Cheyenne told me to :P

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It's almost love.

It's hard to explain really.

He's everything I want physically,

he just takes my breath away.

It's not even that he's soo "hott" or anything like that because he's not, but yet he captured me the first time I saw him.

I'm so comfortable talking to him.

We met at school, and always looked at each other but never said one word.

Then I sent him a message online about six months ago,

He has a girlfriend, but since the day I messaged him we have talked every day on the phone for hours at a time, and not once even flirting.

We can talk about his girlfriend like everything is normal.

But, there's just something weird about us.

I can't figure it out though without crossing lines.

© 2010 godmandistfu


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I love this!!!
Its nice to see your point of view of the situation,
and your realization of how powerful this friendship/relationship is with Charlie, even though you have yet to discover exactly why. It leaves a hint of mystery there, and makes me want to learn more about the connection between them.

I would love to see another piece later on, maybe as your friendship/relationship grows, and what happens next.
Keep writing!!! =]

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love this!!!
Its nice to see your point of view of the situation,
and your realization of how powerful this friendship/relationship is with Charlie, even though you have yet to discover exactly why. It leaves a hint of mystery there, and makes me want to learn more about the connection between them.

I would love to see another piece later on, maybe as your friendship/relationship grows, and what happens next.
Keep writing!!! =]

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yay! *claps* You put it up! (:

Posted 14 Years Ago



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godmandistfu
godmandistfu

Plymouth, MI



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My name is Mandi Lea. I am fifteen years old. I think i'm a little messed up. I don't see things the way I should. I rebel against my own morals. It's almost like I have two people in my head tel.. more..

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