I hope.

A Poem by godmandistfu

He'll touch my skin.

I'll feel his lips.

Our eyes will close.

We'll touch.

He'll love me for a moment.

© 2010 godmandistfu

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Helen Woodward

This is everyone's lot in life...love seems like a fleeting moment in time, an unreal fantasy...and it's gone. We then wait for a re-run that never happens, why we put ourselves through the continuous pain is a mystery to me.
You have said much in a few words and conveyed a strong message!

Cheers,

Helen~

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Rachel 6sixtrümper

very nice, great flow in such few lines!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Helen Woodward

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ruth	I like the conciseness to this poem:) You can say a lot with few words, nicely done! xx Posted 14 Years Ago I like the conciseness to this poem:) You can say a lot with few words, nicely done! xx Rating /100

Mauricio Montoya

nice start but too short you need to add more.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Rose Tyler

Short, sweet and to the point.
Powerful, too.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on June 22, 2010
Last Updated on June 22, 2010

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godmandistfu

Plymouth, MI

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My name is Mandi Lea. I am fifteen years old. I think i'm a little messed up. I don't see things the way I should. I rebel against my own morals. It's almost like I have two people in my head tel.. more..