The Space and The Place

If anyone feels that way, they have to understand that sometimes you have to let go. Once the other significant says they need space then its over. Dont risk it. You deserve better.

She said she needs some space,

But I didnt understand and now I cant find the place,

She said she needs to go.

Instead, I begged her to stay,

I got on the floor and started to pray.

Now, I realize that I shouldnt of begged,

I should of let her find her way.

Now I sit here in love  and cant find a place,

I have to understand that all she needs is space,

My stomach is hurting because I am deeply in love,

I cant sleep because I miss her so much,

My head is full of thoughts and pain,

Now, what I am writing I cant explain.

I think about her, I cant come down,

The mistake is know, it’s my own.

I hope she finds what is space,

Me and her will get back in the place.

Reviews

[Tony]

I can relate to this easily. Having experienced many of the special little hells that the ladies have created for me over the years, I see the emotion portrayed here as real. How mean they get, these girls! And how pathetic we get trying to win back our comfort zones. Horrible. Our friends look at us like we stink. This was a good poem. I enjoyed reading and reflecting it.
Oh yeah, the part about.......I hope she finds what is space......I was remembering going thru one particular breakup and asking this question.....yelling it actually.......
"Space? What the hell does that mean?" I whined.......................but really, we do all know what is Space, don't we?