Sanguine

please review with honesty. let me know if there's anything such as concepts or terms that don't make much sense or need to be explained more. i'm trying to write this story in a way that I'm not the only one who understands it, so any feedback you could give me would be extremely helpful. Also, if it seems like I'm trying to rip off Game of Thrones, well, i kind of am. George R. R. Martin has been a huge style influence for me, but I've tried my hardest to make the story my own. You won't see any dragons in this one.