Being True

Being True

A Poem by sharmila
"

No one knows how much one is hurting most time's

"
She took of her make up,
wiped away her tears,
stood up with elegance,
to take a seat back,
as she waved goodbye.

Now you see a strong,
beautiful,scarless woman,
but how much about her do you 
Really know,
the smiles she fake
makes you believe
that life is not hard
if you just deceive
the innocent into thinking
no one's gonna hate you,
 for being true

© 2016 sharmila


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Well that's the thing, isn't it? Most of us wear a smile while hiding away the sorrows in that trashbag (heart) of us.... I liked this one! Even faking the fake smiles isn't easy 😉

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sharmila

7 Years Ago

true life indeed is a thug of war thank you for reading it.
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You are welcome! ☺
Rellay good.
I like your first stanza.
I will suggest one thing, may be your word arrangements could be better, like
"no one's gonna hate you,
for being true"

Keep writing :)


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sharmila

7 Years Ago

thank you for the tip will edit it soon :)

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Added on December 21, 2016
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sharmila
sharmila

selangor, klang, Malaysia



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