RevengeA Story by ThatDudeA dark Vindictive protagonist plots revenge on the docter who inadvertant caused the death of his girlfriend.Revenge. I have
waited a long time for this. Hour upon hour that stretched endlessly and days
upon days where every palpable second could be counted on the hand of a clock
before me. I know in reality that it has only been a brief moment in time, gone
in a blink. But it was as if every fibre of my body and being had come to live
for this moment. When the pieces would finally fall together and revenge would
be mine. The events of the past, what he had done was unforgiveable, and for it he must be punished. The knowledge clawed at my heart and soul, an inferno of definitive certainty. I knew that I would never rest -could never rest until things were finally made right. An eye for an eye, a life for a life. Shrouded in
a blanket of darkness I waited in the park. It was the night of her untimely demise,
torn from this world by a man she had trusted. The memory was fresher than the
earth of a recently turned grave. Ivory white teeth quickly flashed in the
translucent moonlight to form a grimace. Uncontrollable white hot rage and disgust filled my heart "unable to entertain thoughts of how she had placed her trust into the hands of a doctor with ice cold picks and shards for instruments that had probed and invaded her soul sending it dejected and screaming into an icy wasteland faster than her star crossed fortune could have ever intended. Shadows that hovered around the park began to flicker, distort and thicken as the moonlight became obscured by angry black clouds. All that mattered was that the doctor was the sole culprit. And that I was going to make sure that he would soon be sharing the same fate. The night had been quiet, until now. I had been standing, imprisoned in a cage of my own thoughts for hours. My left hand was beginning to freeze to a temperature that closer resembled the ice pit that filled my heart when my ears perked up; Footsteps. Sluggish, laboured and heavy accompanied by thick breathing. They were the steps of the man that I had come to hate. The doctor. He appeared, a grotesque, overweight abomination panting in fits of short, precious breath that dispersed into the air in small clouds. Dry leaves performed a macabre dance around his feet announcing his arrival to the world, and me. The wind sliced through the trees causing the withered limbs to shake and cry out as if in anticipation. The moon broke free from the clouds to witness the events unfolding. It shone through the treetops casting an eerie glow. Quite fitting. Obscured by the quickly growing darkness I stood rigid, waiting. My breathing became heavy, and my heartbeat quickened into a crescendo. When he was within earshot, I called out to him. My voice breaking the silence of the night like a gun shot. He recognised my face, and smiled. A look into his pale watery eyes and pasty complexion filled me with instant repulsion. My face, a stone mask of serenity gave away nothing of the raging fire inside. Little did the insect know of the swift justice that I had yet to deliver, as intoxicated as he was. I could smell the foul stench of liquor and stale peanuts like a sword at the tip of his breath. It sickened me but I kept my resolve. The creature began to babble something incomprehensible with a tongue rotten and black with foul misconduct. The noise fell on deaf ears. My heart pounded hard in my chest and sweat began to bead on my forehead. This had to be done, for my dear Juliette. When the doctor was about three paces away, I extracted the gun whose cold hard exterior fit snugly into my buzzing fingers. When he lumbered close enough for me to see the imperfections that encompassed his face, I finally screamed. The raw emotion that had remained hidden for so long, bubbling near the surface rose in a tide of uncontrollable power filling the air with a charge of electricity. “She was everything to me, she was mine, and you let her die!” I saw his mouth beginning to form an “O” of protest as it finally dawned on him what was happening. But I didn’t want to hear it. I couldn’t. “You’re a doctor, and you let her slip away!” My index finger closed in on the trigger, the resounding bang shattering into the night. He fell backwards, the life seeping from his eyes long before his soft skull cracked on the hard concrete. I looked on, impassive. A tall dark figure, dressed in dark clothes, standing stock still against the night. But as the crimson red slowly began to pool around his lifeless body, I too began to feel drained. The deed was done. I should be ecstatic. But instead, I found myself sobbing. Tears streamed down my cheeks. I could hardly catch my breath. For the first time since Juliette’s death I began to doubt my actions. What would she think of me now?
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4 Reviews Added on June 16, 2012 Last Updated on August 19, 2012 Tags: Short story, Courswork, Revenge, Horror, Thriller, Frankenstine, Star crossed, Brooding, Death, Love, Sad, English, Freedom Author
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