Vessel for two.

We sing we dance we laugh and  cry
for all the times we have had to say goodbye
Past the sadness,
the deep regretss,
Lovers in the dark,
lost to each others needs.

A heart thats found peace
calmess and clarity,
now taken, shaken and stirred
by a presence of outmost joy
that of the truest,
as of shared by a girl and a boy.

lost in an embrace,
of steel resolve
a vessel for two
to fly through time and space
under the hand of destiny,
to overcome.

Reviews

[Frontier]

Hey! My favorite was the last part, especially how you described the embrace, "of steel resolve a vessel for two" very interesting way to describe it.

[Unloved_kitty]

This is a really good poem =]
Keep it up !
xx

[Max P. Brown]

Excellent flow, and great tone! It was a little bit short, but that doesn't take away from the quality of the poem. Keep up the good work!