My Own

You are goofy but all the while

regal

your eyes are melted sunshine,

yet also the ocean's temper

your hands are soft against my skin,

but rough when on their own

your gait is that of a simple man,

but also of a king

your crown is a backwards cap,

but made of gold to me.

If you were a king,

I'd follow you to fame,

but if you should be a poor man,

then I'd be poor the same

Reviews

[. serah .]

~~ very cute... charming... and adorable... and so refreshing... ~~ your love poems are very unlike typical love poems... and full of interesting surprises... and new images... such as in the expression "your crown is a backwards cap"...

[gnarlym]

Thank you!

[. serah .]

~~ you're welcome...

[Sara H.]

I really love this. The way it's written has a really nice cadence when read, and the contrasts in each line paint lovely pictures.

[gnarlym]

Thank you! I tried to make the contrasts clear, because my boyfriend certainly is a contrast unto himself lol. Thanks for the review!