perfection.

the sun’s rays
illuminate,
every single feature
of your beautiful face.

raven hair,
skin of pearl,
dirt coloured gates
to your soul,
even that mole
beside your
nose that you
hide behind
spectacles,
all culminate
into
perfection.

Author's Note

i've only started writing recently, please be kind.

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Well, for a new writer, you have a fine potential for being a poet. Despite your lovely imagery, I sense a bit of . . . strain in your words, or something of that sort. My advice: let it flow, and listen to poetic music (Atmosphere, Lydia, pretty much anything metaphorical) or read poetry.

[gnafla]

thanks for the encouragement. to be honest, i did struggle with finding the words i wanted. I blame it on my poor vocabulary. Question, whose works do you think are must reads? Plath? Bukowski?

[Tai Ryens]

Well, I'm not too big on the names of poets, I'm more of a drifter that reads whatever I happen to come across. However, I'd suggest Plath; as she is one of my favored writers.