Crazy World

Inspired by my crazy dreams and a poem I had just read

Darkness claims

my tired

body,

 

And I 

 

Slide into

my crazy

world,

 

Called dreams.

 

I let

go of

myself,

 

For a bit,

 

And just

have some

fun.

 

I need

 

A break

from the

craziness,

 

Called life.

 

But alas!,

light comes

again.

 

Im thrown

 

back into

the life

I

 

Hid from

 

Last night.

until tonight

dreams,

 

Until tonight.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Slight, stripped bare of emotion and tactile, a relevant prose, well done.

[Evan Kleve]

Again wonderful. You really have a way of connecting to the reader. And your flow and word choice is, again, wonderful. Amazing job.

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

"I let
go of
myself,

For a bit,

And just
have some
fun."

This stanza(s) was great. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Keep writing :)