We begin

Okay, so most of you already know me, and what's wrong with me, but for those who don't I'm Jade, and I'm fire.

 

I can control it, and I'm practially made from it. I can shot fire balls, stream lava, and I'm hot to the touch.

 

When I last ended my story I had just woken up after I destroyed two other people like me, and I found out I had a little brother.

 

Well, I'm going to take you with me on this crazy ride, and hold on, because this ride is bound to take unexpected turns.

 

Well, then. Let's begin.

 

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I rolled over and sat up.

 

Adian was sitting on the ground next to me, playing with some pebbles.

 

"Hi." I mumbled. My head was spining from sitting up to fast.

 

Adian looked up at me, and smiled, his little teeth gleaming in the dusk.

 

"Uck." I grumbled as I stood up. Adian got shakily to his feet. I realized his muscles were probably tired from being stretched.

 

I leaned down and picked him up, balancing him on my hip. "Let's go. We need to find a phone." 

 

I started walking out of the ruins of the used to be castle.

 

Adian yawned and rested his head on my shoulder. He was tired, I guess it was passed his bed time.

 

I ran my other hand over his long hair over and over again. I started to hum "A Thousand Miles" by Vanessa Carlton. He quickly fell asleep.

 

He started to snore. Quiet, whistling snores. Little and quick.

 

I made it to a brink of some woods that I didn't even know was there. I realized that we wouldn't be able to find our way through the forest in the night. We were going to need shelter.

 

I walked into the woods, looking for a temporary shelter. It took about fifteen minutes before I came across a rock out crop.

 

That was going to have to work.

 

I walked over and sat down on the ground and settled Adian into my lap, cradling him in my arms.

 

I kissed his forehead. "Night sweetie. Sleep tight."

 

I nodded off after a few minutes after wathing Adain sleep, a cute little smile on his peacful face.

 

 

Reviews

[halflives]

Good beginning. If you hadn't already caught me in (though you have) then this would have. Brilliant. I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
-Doc xx

[~Lizzy♬]

Oh, this was a great beginning. This series is awesome! I hope you will write more details and events in your chapters though... make the book come to life! :)

~Lizzard~