IM Chat

This is an IM chat between Ava and Jade. Nolan butts in at the end though.

AvaDestruction72 9:35 - Who was that guy that u and nol were talking to?

 

JazzyJadaGem49 9:35 - OMG!!!!!! that was Luca!!! wasn't he HAWT?!

 

AvaDestruction72 9:36 - He was totally HAWT! but, wat did he want?

 

JazzyJadeGem49 9:37 - He just wanted to talk. but ava, OMG! he was totally flirting

                                with me! OMG!!!!!

 

AvaDestruction72 9:37 - Sure.... ok.... jade, he's like 17. that's just kind creepy.

 

JazzyJadaGem49 9:38 - U R JUST AS BAD AS NOLAN! IM ALMOST 15! WAT IS WITH U 2!

                                U CANT CONTROL ME! ILL GO OUT WITH ANY ONE I WANT!

                                AND BESIDES IT WAS JUST SOME HARMLESS FLIRTING! GET OFF

                                MY CASE!

 

AvaDestruction72 9:39 - Jeez Jade! I'm not trying to control you, God! u can flirt

                                  with whoever u want! besides, he was really hot!

 

JazzyJadaGem49 9:40 - okay.... and yeah he was hot. and he seemed really nice. 

                                can we go 2 the park tomorrow and see if he comes back?

 

AvaDestruction72 9:41 - sure, i dont see why not, just as long as i get to meet him

                                 myself.

 

JazzyJadaGem49 9:42 - thats fine. but can we not bring nolan this time. if i see Luca

                                i want time to talk to him, without nol trying to be my dad.

 

AvaDestruction72 9:43 - yeah, fine, watever, as long as i get to talk to Luca.

 

NolanKnowsAll#1 9:43 - Jada? Jada? Oh, sweet fair Jada! were ought thou?

 

AvaDestruction72 9:44 - nol, not the best time.

 

NolanKnowsAll#1 9:44 - i dont care. Jada, please forgive me! forgive me sweet

                                beautiful kiddo!

 

JazzyJadaGem49 9:45 - no, nolan. go away.

 

NolanKnowsAll#1 9:45 - Jada! Jada! sweetheart! please, please forgive me! please!

                                 i will be ur slave forever!

 

AvaDestruction72 9:46 - god nol, way to grovel! god, be a man!

 

NolanKnowsAll#1 9:47 - if i have to grovel to get Jade to love me again than i will!

 

JazzyJadaGem49 9:48 - i didnt say i didnt love u. im just mad at u! u could have

                               ruined my chances with Luca! i just want to be friends!

 

NolanKnowsAll#1 9:49 - if i promise to trying to interfere with u and Luca will u

                                forgive me? 

 

JazzyJadaGem49 9:50 - yes. night guys.

 

AvaDestruction72 9:50 - night.

 

NolanKnowsAll#1 9:51 - night sweeties.

Author's Note

If your a little confused about Nolan's relationships with the girls that's okay. He loves them both, and he is always complimenting them, because he loves them, and he wants to make sure they know that.

Reviews

[Vanessa Rico]

I just have to say that I love this chapter! this was so creative to use an IM as a chapter...hey teenagers love their computers...so this made perfect sense and fit into the story. Another great chapter!

[Short.Nerd]

Bwahaha I love Nolan. He is amazing. I love how he groveled and seems like a goofball. :) He is officaly my favorite character. This is so good and I'm already addicted to it

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this chapter. To use the language of today youth made the story seem real. I like the questions of age becoming more important. A very strong chapter. Thank you.
Coyote

[Cynthia]

IMing is really cool, you make it a interesting chat and you caught the characteristics and the good things about IMing. Its really attractive, still, and its so cool! Interesting! HOw you get readers to your scene :) My fav. character is Nolan as well, he is such a cute guy ><

[halflives]

I agree with Lizzard: IMing was a very interesting, unique idea for a chapter. I'm having fun reading this. My favorite character so far is Nolan because he reminds me of me a lot. Although I'm a girl. Nevermind. ;) More, please!

[~Lizzy♬]

The IM chat for a chapter was really unique. I really love this book so far! :)

~Lizzard~

[Willow]

This was an interesting technique. I don't believe I've seen it anywhere before, and it certainly illustrates the juvenile minds of your protagonists. I can see easily where each personality melds, and where they differ.