3 AM

Inspiration found in the clouds of a party.

Mistakes don't born re-takes, sometimes lost forever.

Single moments, decisions sounding so right

Every nerve, every signal giving me the all clear.

But when the heart aches in the wake after,

shaking the soul to the core, what have I done?

Was it in the moment or was it with thoughts?

Consequences can gather seconds after,

Whispers sounding so nice, small little prices,

not able to shake it myself and now what did it buy?

Words stopping, phones connecting, back to dancing alone

Weird tingling, invisible truths, back turned at 3

Moving forward, cleanse the soul, sometimes things happen.

Never walking alone, gifted with the treasure of a love deep

Discovery of an inner truth, constantly seeking.

Smile can fade but will fight today, the darkness will let her glow.

Reflection to forgive, world to discover

Dreams to pick, to love, and to hold in my arms.

Strength to forge the path with Him by my side.

Reviews

[closed]

really good poem
i like how your words string together

pretty complex in that it seems to express multiple themes

[Ms. Twitch]

Thank you for the positive words. This was a first where I had a bit of rhythm going, where I would go off on different tangents almost, but glad you still enjoyed it.

[alifeacoustic]

I absolutely love the line But when the heart aches in the wake after, it says it all really, doesn't it. Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.

[Ms. Twitch]

Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that's actually the line I built the poem from. That feeling is when you truly know when there's something wrong. Thank you, again, I appreciate it.

[alifeacoustic]

You're very welcome.