Man In Black

I think I'm asleep,

I can't breathe, 

I feel myself suffocating, help me

I feel to my sides trying to find something

to free me,

I feel him pushing the pillow lower over my face,

I feel his hands holding the cotton pillow

down to the floor from the sides,

I'm cold.

Please stop, man in black,

You're killing me.

Reviews

[Flightless Butterfly]

I like the twist. Was this meant to be scary? Because I got scared towards the end. I like it though. I can picture out and feel the struggle.