Betrothal

Not worth this name I call myself by daily Only worthy of the label I've been given and though it's by your name I pledge myself by what fellowship can light and darkness have? I pledge and stand -or plege and fall. Fall flat on my face as you wash my feet and offer your disrobing while you offer your clothes and life for betrayal such sweet sacrifice. But not for this half-hearted lover not for this hate ever replacing perfect purity. No. Oh God. Not for me. Don't let this chalice come to pass. Not on behalf of your less-than-perfect-perfect-design I'm not worth it all cause when I pledge to stand I pledge to fall and fall. and fall. fall. say hello to an imperfect bride made perfect only on her wedding night and I've nowhere left to run and hide. Take me, imperfectly perfect and change me. I surrender and I fall.

Reviews

[Bill Grimes Jr.]

"Take me, imperfectly perfect
and change me.
I surrender and I fall."

http://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?book_id=73&chapter=22&verse=17&version=31&context=verse

SELAH!

:-)

[Limitality]

Amazing.
I really enjoyed it, and it is very complex. Relate-able.
It's really something.

I can tell you poured your soul in this poem, telling people the complexity of your mind. Very well done.
^^