feeling lonely

free verse thoughts

I said im feeling really lonely I dont need you to hold me just talk to me babe tell me all the things you wish to say and in all the ways it the world will end

he said im feeling really lonely i dont need you to speak to me babe just grasp these sheets the way you hold my head

I'm feeling lonely and need somebody 

He's feeling lonely and needs some body 

Hes not one for talking and my body is too rigid to hold 

but pinned between these sheets the sweetest notes of comfort i seek 

disgrace laying on his chest I fall asleep as he shoves me off 

he said im feeling lonley and want some body but I dont want your forever 

Author's Note

free verse thoughts please ignore grammar

Reviews

[Serendipity Planet]

you write in your beautiful style of honesty
Nothing you dont expect to find with your powerful beautiful wors as usual