Heat of the moment.

Heat of the moment.

A Poem by Lydia Waldock
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Fwb can be hard I guess

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Did you fall in love with me when you saw my body move?
Curving broken hips and shaking legs was i beautiful to you then?
Were you feeling my air? Were you estactic that I looked at you?
Or was my psychical meat just what you needed for those hours.
Dripping in golden lust were your eyes. Sweat and beads grasping sheets you had me then.
In the moments of euphoria was I yours?
Or was I just flesh and bones for your use?
Did you ever want me.
Keeping any form of love for the wrong way please just stay
I wanted this
Right?

© 2018 Lydia Waldock


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Ugh. Great piece. Really makes the reader feel like they are in a fwb relationship with one sided feelings.
The third to last line has me mildly confused, however. What is the wrong way?

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lydia Waldock

5 Years Ago

Yeah that was my aim, And yeah I need to fix that thanks for bringing that to my attention!

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Lydia Waldock
Lydia Waldock

British Columbia, Canada



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21 year old lover of poetry even bigger lover of writing poetry some trash some gold. life's tough might as well make some art more..

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