Just Sad

Even as the wind blows

leaves will find the lake

Even as the heart grows

it begins to ache

Nothing is as it should be

sadness all around

Peel my heart off of my sleeve

and throw it to the ground.

Reviews

[free will]

A really honest and descriptives way to express sadness...from the heart. Thank you for sharing.

[Botania]

Thanks Free.

[Braden Freeman]

The sadness does come through very strongly in this piece. Sometimes it would be nice if we could just throw our hearts away to avoid the pain of sadness. But the heart is also useful because it has brought us all together online!

[Botania]

Hi. True. Hey thanks for reading!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the sadness exudes from this piece harder than the flow of blood from a sudden deep cut...although the pain here is much more over time...the slow death.

[Botania]

Luckily sadness is just an emotion that indicates something needs to be fixed or changed, or improved. Thank you Jacob.