Angels with a Broken Wing

Arm in arm

they comfort me

Round and round

as in a dream

Two entwined

as life should be

Bound on Earth

with broken wings.

Author's Note

Referring to a little statue that, although mysteriously broken, hasn't lost any charm.

Reviews

[Aley]

Hey Botania, me again.

You say you're referring to something particular here? I don't really see it. It reminds me of children playing ring around the rosey, but not statues, so perhaps if you added more of a poetic exposition about the scene and really bring us into the moment you'd get more of an image invoked and be able to suggest with adjectives the sort of discrepancy that hasn't lost it's charm.

[Botania]

Also thinking about fallen ppl.