Little Bird

We search for the sea, only to drown - but weren't we made to fly?

Little bird, so peaceful and free, where will you fly today?
"Over the river and into the sea, if only I knew the way."

Can you see the sky?

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

hmm this is interesting...I wish it was longer to see a better picture and understand the poem more. It is good what you have said though.

Good Job

[Hannah]

Thanks :) You're right, it might be nice longer, there was a pretty long thought process behind this little thing after all :P but I'm not sure. Anyway this was a bit of practice for me in short writing, because as soon as it gets longer I think I tend to get over-descriptive. Thanks for the review :D

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Yeah sometimes it is bad being over-descriptive D: there is just a hidden story waiting to be told though lol You're welcome