Thank you for covering such a much needed topic and quite well although I believe that in your dealing with the issue you may have hurt yourself. I also would like to thank you for the read request and for sharing this with us. "I am the Just cultivation of hatred, fueled by love of this civilization from every Poet, Philosopher, Artist, and Great Mind history has had to offer." are my favorite lines. You are off a bit in rhythm and rhyme, but the flow is excellent. And also, make sure you stab the issue dead on up front otherwise you may confuse some readers. But don't get me wrong, you did write very nicely here. Thank you for sharing with me again. Kudos. 9.6/10.
This poem is powerful and carry a true message. The world have gotten so twisted up. Peace and friendship are rare words. I like your message and strength in the complete poem. Thank you.
Coyote
Thank you for covering such a much needed topic and quite well although I believe that in your dealing with the issue you may have hurt yourself. I also would like to thank you for the read request and for sharing this with us. "I am the Just cultivation of hatred, fueled by love of this civilization from every Poet, Philosopher, Artist, and Great Mind history has had to offer." are my favorite lines. You are off a bit in rhythm and rhyme, but the flow is excellent. And also, make sure you stab the issue dead on up front otherwise you may confuse some readers. But don't get me wrong, you did write very nicely here. Thank you for sharing with me again. Kudos. 9.6/10.
I loved this, "Say something profound, or die"
Yup awesome!
Death to iphones says I!!
Well done on an epic write and I shall see you in the past!
~Satan's Toaster
Man i really love your writing and your perspective on life...you see what is going on around you and address it as it is. You tell the TRUTH. Awesome...really:)
My name is Glenn Davis Jr. I am not clever enough to come up with a pen name I suppose...... Oh well. I was born and raised in South Louisiana, about an hour below New Orleans, pretty much in the midd.. more..