Limit

take me to the limit

not being hindered by my world wants

 

the limit

 

where i once thought i know existed

to find out there will always be more than what i know

 

time always ticking

trickling across space and time

like a single rain drop falling from the sky

 

never ending by hitting the earth

with it perpetual spiral of questions

 

finally coming to a rest

where all doubts are temporally dissolved

 

the limit

 

taken back by the sudden realization

that i am not the center of creation

 

understanding nothing that i previously knew

while forgetting everything i thought was true

 

the limit

 

which hold keeps me in shackles

around every extremity of my body

but allowing my soul to wonder endlessly

throw the deepest ditches

to the highest clouds

 

 

Reviews

[Kitty]

Get it Jordan, I see you working those metaphors.. Very well done. I especially loved
"taken back by the sudden realization

that i am not the center of creation" --- That is the beginning of Wisdom my friend..

Keep up the good work J.

Write on my friend,
Melba

[Trisha]

It sounds like you are coming into spirit and realizing that you are who you are. That is the first step in growing, letting go and moving on. Beautifully written my new friend.