Mysiah

So precious to hold a bundle of joy in your arms

keeping it away from harm

never letting go

 

So beautiful to depend on you

just as much you depend on me

 

So wonderful to see everyday is something new

         different

                exciting

 

Looking up the ceiling fan with those big brown eyes

smiling at every kiss

touching everything you can grasp

 

Always crying when I put you down

but always feeling that I will never let you go

 

Reviews

[Pimpinella]

Looking up the ceiling fan with those big brown eyes

Im a bit confused with the wording of this sentence. It may be a typo or something but its the only sentence i had trouble with.

The poem is real heart touching. It greatly describes the connection between a newborn and the parent.

Very good poem. I enjoyed the read.

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

This is very nice.
It's very heart warming.
Great rythme.
Excellent flow of words.
I loved it.
Wonderfully written!
Great Job!
^_^

[Kitty]

Very nice Jordan. I remember when I first held both my babies for the first time. They are angels sent to us from heaven.

Very sweet.

Write on,
Melba

[Poeticpiers]

a heart warming spill of feelings with which I can relate very easily Expressed in poetic prose