R-EVOLVER

 

Insignificant

Small, fragile, whole, detached

Awake

Alone

Aware

Strong, fertile, wide eyed, determined

Indestructable

Author's Note

Feeling apart from the masses

Reviews

[Wildecat]

Short sweet and to the point, a very nice write.

[Phillip de la Flor]

Nice poem. Short and to the point. Very nice!

[Sound]

Nice. I like how the title fits in with the form of the poem.

[verano]

Interesting pattern in this poem, as it moves symmetrically from beginning to end, centering itself around the word 'alone'. The pattern is visible in the first letter of each line [I-S-A-A-A-S-I], and then you also have the internal pattern in lines 2 and 5 [S-F-W-D]. I like that sort of organization, as it implies that the words themselves, though they appear isolated, are all connected together (or at least that is my take on it).

[Everchanging Disaster]

I love the progression, from fragile to indestructible-it's like you found out who you are in 20 words or less.
And it has great flow with the alliteration, and it's perfectly balanced...great read, instant classic.

By the way,
Love you!

[[untitled]]

Short and concise. I like the word play you did here. The title is unique and the way you spelled it makes it even more intriguing. Good job.

[Dalaina Renee]

I enjoyed reading this! Good job!

[Danny J.H.]

amazing in such little time it wakes the senses and as they are aroused they sniff, hungry for more.

[After the Blackbird Sin..]

That's actually a really good poem. You took like thirteen words and grew, which is so rare. Teach me your secrets!