Welcome to Immortality

Gotta keep the Faith, brotha -

There comes a time, in which things end and all the world comes to a halt. The bright light shines and brings you peace of mind.
As the angels flow down from the heavens. Here for the souls that have done right in this world and before the demons come to punish the rest.
We all had the same test with an answer of faith -
keeping your soul full of positive energy, and sharing your blessings with those in need.
These angels were saving the souls of the innocent and casting them from the evils within them, beside them, and all around them
- that had created a life of misery, pain, and slavery.
A song was sung as our souls were released to the heavens, greeting those we've lost and missed. It was quite simple - to get ready for this.
The beauty of heaven would have been breath-taking for your body, engulfing your soul in eternal happiness and glory.
Whilst the evils were discarded and ripped to shreds and cast down into the darkness of Hell - leaving the earth in shambles.
God presents Himself to you and thanks you for your faith and your trust in Him - thanks you for the good you've done and welcomes you to the land of immortality.
A place of peace, harmony, and beauty...
a place you never could have imagined, a place where you will spend eternity, living a life of happiness with God.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the desire of this poem. I do believe good people who are kind and love their friends and family will know peace one day.
"A place of peace, harmony, and beauty...
a place you never could have imagined, a place where you will spend eternity, living a life of happiness with God.
Thank you for a outstanding story.
Coyote

[M.Babu]

The light at the end of the tunnel? inviting and desirable, yet very very difficult to get to. The obstacles that heed our reaching this paradise seem only to be overcome by sheer willpower! The evils will be discarded on pressing on, keeping only the goal in sight I think Amanda.

Beautiful!

~M.Babu~

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Amanda, I have not read this one............this is beautiful...........

[Ibreez Shabkhez]

There are lots of features for women as well

[Ibreez Shabkhez]

1. The Most Beneficent (Allah)!

2. Has taught (you mankind) the Qur'an (by His Mercy).

3. He created man.

4. He taught him eloquent speech.

5. The sun and the moon run on their fixed courses (exactly) calculated with measured out stages for each (for reckoning, etc.).

6. And the herbs (or stars) and the trees both prostrate.

7. And the heaven He has raised high, and He has set up the Balance.

8. In order that you may not transgress (due) balance.

9. And observe the weight with equity and do not make the balance deficient.

10. And the earth He has put for the creatures.

11. Therein are fruits, date-palms producing sheathed fruit-stalks (enclosing dates).

12. And also corn, with (its) leaves and stalk for fodder, and sweet-scented plants.

13. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

14. He created man (Adam) from sounding clay like the clay of pottery.

15. And the jinns did He create from a smokeless flame of fire.

16. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

17. (He is) the Lord of the two easts (places of sunrise during early summer and early winter) and the Lord of the two wests (places of sunset during early summer and early winter).

18. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

19. He has let loosed the two seas (the salt water and the sweet) meeting together.

20. Between them is a barrier which none of them can transgress.

21. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

22. Out of them both come out pearl and coral.

23. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

24. And His are the ships going and coming in the seas, like mountains.

25. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

26. Whatsoever is on it (the earth) will perish.

27. And the Face of your Lord full of Majesty and Honour will abide forever.

28. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

29. Whosoever is in the heavens and on earth begs of Him (its needs from Him). Every day He has a matter to bring forth (such as giving honour to some, disgrace to some, life to some, death to some, etc.)!

30. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

31. We shall attend to you, O you two classes (jinns and men)!

32. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

33. O assembly of jinns and men! If you have power to pass beyond the zones of the heavens and the earth, then pass (them)! But you will never be able to pass them, except with authority (from Allah)!

34. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

35. There will be sent against you both, smokeless flames of fire and (molten) brass, and you will not be able to defend yourselves.

36. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

37. Then when the heaven is rent asunder, and it becomes rosy or red like red-oil, or red hide.

38. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

39. So on that Day no question will be asked of man or jinn as to his sin, (because they have already been known from their faces either white or black).

40. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

41. The Mujrimun (polytheists, criminals, sinners, etc.) will be known by their marks (black faces), and they will be seized by their forelocks and their feet.

42. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

43. This is Hell which the Mujrimun (polytheists, criminals, sinners, etc.) denied.

44. They will go between it (Hell) and the boiling hot water!

45. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

46. But for him who [the true believer of Islamic Monotheism who performs all the duties ordained by Allah and His Messenger Muhammad , and keeps away (abstain) from all kinds of sin and evil deeds prohibited in Islam and] fears the standing before his Lord, there will be two Gardens (i.e. in Paradise).

47. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

48. With spreading branches;

49. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

50. In them (both) will be two springs flowing (free)

51. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

52. In them (both) will be every kind of fruit in pairs.

53. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

54. Reclining upon the couches lined with silk brocade, and the fruits of the two Gardens will be near at hand.

55. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

56. Wherein both will be those (maidens) restraining their glances upon their husbands, whom no man or jinn yatmithhunna (has opened their hymens with sexual intercourse) before them.

57. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

58. (In beauty) they are like rubies and coral.

59. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

60. Is there any reward for good other than good?

61. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

62. And besides these two, there are two other Gardens (i.e. in Paradise).

63. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

64. Dark green (in colour).

65. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

66. In them (both) will be two springs gushing forth water.

67. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

68. In them (both) will be fruits, and date- palms and pomegranates.

69. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

70. Therein (gardens) will be fair (wives) good and beautiful;

71. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

72. Houris (beautiful, fair females) restrained in pavilions;

73. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

74. Whom no man or jinn yatmithhunna (has opened their hymens with sexual intercourse) before them.

75. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

76. Reclining on green cushions and rich beautiful mattresses.

77. Then which of the Blessings of your Lord will you both (jinns and men) deny?

78. Blessed be the Name of your Lord (Allah), the Owner of Majesty and Honour.

[Ibreez Shabkhez]

before the demons come to punish the rest.

Demons are the ones being punished... nice thought anyway. I believe in most of this.

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it's good to have faith..and hope..I believe that they in no end..and no hell and no place to go for 'evil' doers..we all go to Heaven..because God is thankfully not like us...

[OT]

ah the immortal afterlife - great descriptions throughout this - you are a very natural writer so it's always a pleasure to read - and though a story it has a poetic feel to it too! (the non-poet becoming the poet!) haha - brilliant response to challenge! nice!

[Star]

And as a fellow believer.... I know too well this place is called Heaven.....love this piece you have written.... the language and descriptive beauty in it

[Bard Constantine]

You recreate the belief of immortal afterlife quite vividly, painting a glowing picture with your poetic brushstrokes. Certainly a warm and inviting piece exquisitely detailed; wonderful writing...