Pain of Love

 

 

 

 

the pain you bring me

is not a pain of heartache

but a pain of love

 

the understanding

of what this love means to me

is too powerful

 

never shall i love

the way i'm in love with you

a constant hunger

 

the pain you bring me

is not a pain of heartache

but a pain of love

Reviews

[Crowley]

Pretty much wraps up that feeling when you feel so in tune with somebody that just the smell of them get you runnin' and gunnin'. I think there are people who are so physical a match for us genetically that just their presence wields a power stronger than just love....its in the gut I think. Nice write.

[Fran Marie]

Love has magic powers and a harmomy all its own, yet also pain has a place deep within true love's emotions ~ nicely expressed here and well penned!

[Ruth]

And love is a pain, so intensely so! You master that here love and this is brilliantly conveyed! I like this a lot...superbly thought out and resonates, love is a battle, like every other thing in life! Awesome! xx

[Kyla H]

The pain of love, oh how I remember and dream of it so. It's truly magical to be 'in love', and experience the heartache that comes with it! Anyway, very nicely done!

[Bare Bohemian]

hark what's this I see
not only a poem but
5-7-5 too

so much for being
someone who hates poetry
what a hypocrite ;)

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-Greer]

Ha ha! ;D

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Poignant, every line laced and corsetted with the pain taken on willingly...

[Thea Fuentebella]

i just love the repetition. makes your point stressed and understood. so uncanny of you to say that there's also a pain of loving too much. excellent work!

[OT]

strong sentiments here - the idea - sometimes pain is born from the best of things - the pain of love - the aching and longing - searching - the constant hunger! well expressed and written! nice!!

[Lindsey]

This is short but emotional and I like it.

[Magdelena]

I like this! It shows all kinds of love, for sometimes we do love and it can be so painful being it feels like a deep stabbing in the heart. Your imagery was right on for been there, done it, and thank the Lord, done with it! lol

Way to go.

Mags xx

[Cynthia]

Thats really amazing! I love it!! Its so true about loving someone and the pain we will feel, very beautiful. I believe the pain isn't as bad as the real one, sweet, nice job! Also, I love the way you repeat the first staza to the last one,
wonderful!