The Misery of Bess

Please don't fix my mistakes, I like my writing the way that it is and if I ever get my writing published, I'll pay an editor to do so. Feel free to tell me what you like AND dislike about the plot, the characters and the imagination. There will be pictures but until my illustrator gets to work on them (she lives about 3 hrs away from me, so we have to work this via snail mail), all you get is my boring writing. Yes, my illustrator is what makes my work spectacular. I promise you that.