Zephyr

You strolled in subtly
Like a soothing breeze
Carrying in the scent of sunshine
In my dark gloomy despondent being
Making me, helping me
And ruffling my hair
With your strong and gentle
Wind of love and support
Your subtle zephyr
Shook me up, from the inside
Your faith in me
Finally made me believe
A storm was created
In my chaotic mind
Quelling my doubts
Building on the foundation
Of your love
You saved me from
Myself.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Mayank]

The west wind of love, taking away the gloomy clouds. That's how love feels, making you comfortable and tucking you in gentle warmth.

[Girija Virkar]

A cocoon.. wrapped by the beautiful silk threads of unconditional support and unassuming love just for me.
A little continuation.
Thank you!

[Ashwin Shanker]

Lovey dovey. Faith is often one of the biggest gifts which a man can give to another woman. Often overlooked, under appreciated. Being loving, supporting at the same time being strong and gentle; hallmarks of a great knight in armor. Great stuff

[Girija Virkar]

Thank you for the kind words.. but I would like to think it's just not about a man supporting a woman. It can be the other way around and also it can be anyone who supports someone..

[Ashwin Shanker]

Absolutely. I am someone who believes that regardless of what society thinks or does; A woman is equally capable of being a knight in shining armor as well (Recent example I can think of us Brienne of Tarth in GOT).

[Girija Virkar]

Got fan! Well thank you!!

[Ashwin Shanker]

Yes Yes. GOT Fan :D

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

First off, Zephyr is a beautiful word. Thank you for teaching me that. :)

Your poem was beautiful, deeply, equal to the title. Short and encouraging. Worth the read! Tyfs!

[Girija Virkar]

Thank you for the kind words... appreciate them!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

My pleasure!