Lost at the Bottom of a Bottle

It's about my alcoholic deadbeat dad

Lost inside a bottle too deep to escape
Lost in your own dependency
Drowning your mind
Drowning your love
resurfacing only when the contants of the bottle grow shallow
Only to swim back down
You live in this bottle yet you've never seen the bottom
Lost in your bitter home
The only one that you've ever known
Lost in unconscience dreams
Lost chances
Lost Family
Lost love

Author's Note

I encourage reviews and constructive criticism if needed =)

Reviews

[cest la vie]

This piece needs no criticism; powerful read, dark, reality.
"Lost in unconscience dreams" wonderful phrasing of words. If this is a true piece, I will paray for you & your Father. Keep writing as this is a wonderful write.