The Cure
A Poem by
Ian Gilmour
Dim light
Crawls across
Dark mahogany floors
Nestling
In spilled bottles
Bleeding beer
Amid shaking fingertips
© 2015 Ian Gilmour
Reviews
Very very well written,, thanks for sharing
Posted 9 Years Ago
In very few words, you were able to create a scene that others can almost see in front of them. Well done.
Posted 9 Years Ago
In very few words, you were able to create a scene that others can almost see in front of them. Well done.
A powerful poem. Described bad and lonely end. The good description create sad vision and poor decision. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
A powerful poem. Described bad and lonely end. The good description create sad vision and poor decision. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
I really liked it!
Keep it up!
(Nice to see you back!)
Posted 9 Years Ago
I really liked it!
Keep it up!
(Nice to see you back!)
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Added on September 28, 2015
Last Updated on September 28, 2015
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