WISH

a piece from my life

A place I see often and often go but this night was different behind my grand mothers house sat a truck I named "BIG RED" it once belonged to some one dear to me but now gone I sit in the darkness of the midnight sky covering me like a blaket of black with my thoughts rushing by like shoting stars I begin to look up and see not one of them not one star in this beautiful night sky I love not one star for the childern to wish on in the thought of letting it go I close my eye to hope fully put my mind too rest but one thought makes another and that other makes another tell my head starts spining oh how I wish there were stars in this sky too night I would wish on all of them at once for it to stop in time I gave up and opened my eyes to see I am not were I once was I am at my old house in my old yard and who else is there the one I hold dear and near my father he is speaking to me but what is he saying? "Do you see that star that star is Mars" I begin to cry to stop the crying I close my eyes and hold them tiet and ask.Why? Why did you have to go? I slowly open my eye and hes gone and i am left right back were I started sitting there on "BIG RED" finly I look up to see millions of stars and the one called Mars.

Author's Note

Hope you all like it its from my past

Reviews

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This is really sweet and sincere, even if the grammar isn't that great. I like it. :)