Floating

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Livin in a dream world
Floatin along
My shadow keeps passing me by
As if its tryin to tell me somethin.

So many paths, so little time.
Where to go, what to do?
Just bury me, bury me under this rock, no shadows can find me there.
I'm lost, all locked up. Fightin for reality, but all I see is gray.
Unmoving, heavy. Like my feet, my breath.
A slug and a turtle passin me by,... Where am I? What have I become?
My shadow is back. He speaks.
"Look in this mirror b***h, what do you see?!"

It was the rock. That f****n rock, was me.

Author's Note

This is just comin outta my gut right now guys. Don't care how you rate it. It's not meant to be good. It's just the first step back into the ring for me. Rate it, review it, I would appreciate your feedback.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Livin in a dream world
Floatin along
My shadow keeps passing me by
As if its tryin to tell me somethin. "

Interesting poem. A fight with one's shadow or someone else???

[Gidget666]

Ones own shadow mostly. But others as well.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Good to know...You are welcome...:)..................