Follow The Star

Follow the star that illuminates the sky,

It's guides you through the dark,

Brings love that was once apart,

What else can it do,

The answer is only in a pure heart.

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad, and I think the brevity of this piece underscores it very elegantly. You could have said a lot more here but you chose not to, and that gives this a solemn tone which I think you were going for. Well done.