Distance

hope you all enjoy

Distance growing

Time slowing

Until the day I see her smile

 

Talking texting

Sex then resting

But only for a short while.

 

Once again waiting for her dial.

 

Hope burning

World turning

She’s a million miles away

 

Smile fading

Words changing

Until there’s nothing left to say.

Reviews

[Arte Por Vida]

This is amazing! I really enjoyed it. It's so simple looking, backed by some real emotion. Great job!

[Rose of Gondor]

Really cute, and really romantic with that little touch of sad longing in it that makes it just perfect! Lovely poem, and you've even made it rhyme!