Beautiful

Many things are beautiful
The shine in the eyes of someone you love.
Lightening and thunder in a summer storm.

The way the stars glitter in the sky above.
The sound of rain as it falls from the clouds.

Peace and quiet in the dead of the night,

That sweet way the music soothes your soul,

The full moon as it sheds beams of pure light.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coffee Vampier]

This is a very thoughtful poem in the scene that it makes one this about life. this is short but you also managed to be quite descriptive. Your poem is quite lovely, defiantly now one of my favorites.

[Kevin Horsley]

Short poem detailing what it is that you find beautiful around you and that cannot be faulted. Nicely expressed.

Just a couple of small typos: Lighting - Lightning, beems - beams.

Peace and quiet in the dead of the night, the sweet way the music soothes your soul,The full moon as it sheds beems of pure light. - this is good but needs to be broken into the last stanza correctly and try using the word 'that' instead of 'the' in the sentence -the sweet way the music soothes your soul

All in all enjoyable.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. A wise person can see the beauty of the day and the night. The description allowed me to see good visions of the simple things for us to enjoy and see. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[April]

np even if im scare of thunder love the sound of it

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a very good poem. You did a nice job writing it. I love it. It's going to be added into my favorites. I love the imagery you used within the piece. Thanks for sharing, girl!