Illusion of love

save the blind tiger.

Your eternal love,

was an illusion,

your eternal love,

just sad confusion

 

all those feelings,

left me bleeding,

 

your kiss beyond sweet,

cut through my teeth,

 

embraced so lovingly,

but only momentarily

Reviews

[JackValor86]

a sweet poem but i feel like you flopped the ending

[SyberRose]

I like the word illusion...if only momentarily...I think most have experienced this allusion one or twice....Nicely done ghoul...SyberRose

[Nestor Gonzalez]

many thanks ma'am :]

[Chris]

Relationship 101...

[Nestor Gonzalez]

it's a work of fiction :] never had any real relationship haha

[Chris]

perceptions are what each of us carry inside... and what we base our thoughts - from.

[Nestor Gonzalez]

that is very true,you sir are very eloquent,but not empty eloquence your intelligence is evident i've barely encountered you and i'm amazed at your wisdom and abilities much respect

[Chris]

Welcome to our world... it's not near as bad as it could be... nor as good - but that's another "perception". Some good people here to walk with.